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Glass half empty and glass half full,
Everyday I feel the pull,
And so I ask, where did you go?
Please oh please, just let me know,
I never thought I'd see you leave,
But as it happened, we all grieved.

An Autumn leaf fallen to the dirt,
Now to become one with the earth,
Like the stars shining in the night,
In my heart, you twinkle bright,
A glass vase, I was shattered,
In an instant, you were all that mattered.

As I carry on, you'll stay with me,
I hope you know what you meant to me,
My childhood you helped to define,
Now everything is out of line,
A million tears shed for you,
Oh, I will never forget you.
I wrote this at 2 in the morning. It's a lot better than the last one and it really sums up my emotions and how I feel. It's deeply personal, but I'm quite proud of it, of what it expresses and what I wrote it for.
I've been meaning to write something for over a month now and it just came out last night. Whether you like the piece or not, I don't care, it came straight from the heart, and that's all that matters to me.
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hearts702 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome :D
I hope u read my stories
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MariahIZTIM Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Thanks, and I will!
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hearts702 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Writer
also watch me :D
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iChrno Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have you know that I did enjoy it. And I'll also have you know that this is not grounds for another conversation. ;D
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MariahIZTIM Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And no, it won't. So like. Fuck off? There. Now you don't want to talk to me. (:
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iChrno Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wish dA had a like button... xD
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MariahIZTIM Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
I said the same thing tonight. Also, thank you for favoriting this and stuff and cats.
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Christopher007 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, you.
That was really deep. Not to mention sad.
But I love it, it's really nice! You have reason to be proud.
Ps, <3
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MariahIZTIM Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
It is indeed very deep.
Thank youu.
<3
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